tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5682081471599286551.post4055930917828953953..comments2024-03-27T11:43:33.889-04:00Comments on Stapleton Kearns: Crit 2Stapleton Kearnshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00226409516935208164noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5682081471599286551.post-17757251881857842052010-09-28T01:39:06.073-04:002010-09-28T01:39:06.073-04:00Martyn;
You are welcome. I have to have my Bountie...Martyn;<br />You are welcome. I have to have my Bounties!<br />....................StapeStapleton Kearnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00226409516935208164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5682081471599286551.post-64660632803518571882010-09-28T01:38:21.933-04:002010-09-28T01:38:21.933-04:00Silvio;
Sure send me a painting. I can't crit ...Silvio;<br />Sure send me a painting. I can't crit them all, but I do the ones that offer me a teaching opportunity.<br />.......................StapeStapleton Kearnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00226409516935208164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5682081471599286551.post-13256276874463964492010-09-28T01:37:08.879-04:002010-09-28T01:37:08.879-04:00Bill;
What target?
...................StapeBill;<br />What target?<br />...................StapeStapleton Kearnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00226409516935208164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5682081471599286551.post-48965662011346782010-09-28T01:36:33.364-04:002010-09-28T01:36:33.364-04:00Mary:
I didn't change very much. I really like...Mary:<br />I didn't change very much. I really liked that piece.<br />.....................StapeStapleton Kearnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00226409516935208164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5682081471599286551.post-63736492268787813452010-09-28T01:35:51.717-04:002010-09-28T01:35:51.717-04:00Marian;
Too much ink!
....................StapeMarian;<br />Too much ink!<br />....................StapeStapleton Kearnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00226409516935208164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5682081471599286551.post-59041109528012019102010-09-28T01:35:13.352-04:002010-09-28T01:35:13.352-04:00Gregory:
The 17 year old artist outs himself below...Gregory:<br />The 17 year old artist outs himself below!<br />...................StapeStapleton Kearnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00226409516935208164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5682081471599286551.post-20284860162271209942010-09-28T01:34:09.298-04:002010-09-28T01:34:09.298-04:00Thanks Nika
..................StapeThanks Nika<br />..................StapeStapleton Kearnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00226409516935208164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5682081471599286551.post-30582435355259578172010-09-27T19:09:57.001-04:002010-09-27T19:09:57.001-04:00Something that might interest you guys is the fact...Something that might interest you guys is the fact that I forgot to bring paper towels, so changing from one color to another was a bit tricky. It was good practice though, and I recommend trying it some time.<br /><br />Thanks for the critique Stape!Martyn Chamberlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06831461898831492709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5682081471599286551.post-84649344265040645802010-09-27T13:26:24.360-04:002010-09-27T13:26:24.360-04:00I enjoyed your changes and the shadows needed ligh...I enjoyed your changes and the shadows needed lightening in value. I think there is good harmony in handling of the painting but the composition could be improved. The straight road from left center up through the painting is too quick. Would like to see greater angles in the road and a barn or house to make my eye stay or fix in the midground area. Like the blog on crits. Can I send in One?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5682081471599286551.post-52955899945375503182010-09-27T09:58:31.789-04:002010-09-27T09:58:31.789-04:00I agree, that is a great painting! Your correction...I agree, that is a great painting! Your corrections has tipped it to<br />the targets center.billspaintingmnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18343383719352968590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5682081471599286551.post-36038529222264555192010-09-27T09:55:56.108-04:002010-09-27T09:55:56.108-04:00Very nice! My first view of a fresh post in weeks...Very nice! My first view of a fresh post in weeks. The changes are great and really brighten up the piece - and nice variations in the shadow temps.Mary Byromhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12647925500872647350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5682081471599286551.post-47053342975861902752010-09-27T09:14:01.956-04:002010-09-27T09:14:01.956-04:00OK, I agree about that shadow patterns being a lit...OK, I agree about that shadow patterns being a little too repetitive . Good call. But I like the darker shadows because the warm lighted areas are emphasized by comparison.mariandioguardi.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16963944767715466681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5682081471599286551.post-81295706739992110022010-09-27T03:55:28.170-04:002010-09-27T03:55:28.170-04:00Even though the format is a portrait, it has a str...Even though the format is a portrait, it has a strong sense of breadth. This artist deserves the first ever Stapleton Kearns artists' name reveal.Gregory Beckerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06840770708114257366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5682081471599286551.post-61145982650048608942010-09-27T00:49:22.534-04:002010-09-27T00:49:22.534-04:00I really dig these past couple of crits, it explai...I really dig these past couple of crits, it explains more then one can possibly do in pages and pages of writing. And you're so right on with it, it's thoroughly enjoyable. Thanks for taking your time to do it!Nikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16009913024508139402noreply@blogger.com